Tada!
I have a bet with my friends, if they can critique me so it hurts my feelings I owe them a drink.
Obviously, I can’t make the same bet here. I must make a smaller one. If you critique my work so cruelly it hurts my feelings, I will put you in the acknowledgements as a beta-reader. I might put you in the beta-readers regardless, haha, but you will know you are the best. 😉
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